I am reviewing Stephanie Christensen’s Storify story, found at https://storify.com/slc_90/24-hour-livin-hot-on-the-hill-challenge.
Personally, I think the information could be rearranged more to fit the reverse pyramid structure, and to move the quotes closer to the beginning of the article. The tweets at the end do fit well where they are, but they feel separate and unincorporated into the story. The information gathered suits the story well.
Overall, a good story.
jameswyattcullen 